Working on a Complete Sentences

What makes a complete sentence there with a subject and a verb it’s got an idea it’s going to be a narrative you can give lots of details and everything it’s great ok did I get anything for C C is this paragraph is about the increasing divorce rate now when it comes to fixing these types of sentences you just really have to remove the the part that announces the the topic right so I’m did we get anything from that no okay I’ll just give an answer here I would say something like the increasing divorce rate as many effects on society something like that there the increasing divorce rate has many effects on society keep it simple but again now you’ve got you still have a complete sentence you’ve got an idea in there and it’s a little bit more focused too if you just say this paragraph is about the increasing divorce rate.

We don’t know if you’re talking about the causes of it the effects of it or anything like that so now it’s it’s much clearer and more focused all right what about II three reasons to study a language abroad coming in from Mohammed I think yeah good yeah so maybe he took my advice from from earlier and kept it simple and again nailed it there he said there are three reasons why you should study a language abroad I would just change that one that G to an S there right three reasons I hear a sentence coming in let me see so the one from from Gerald may be coming in as says teen pregnancy may be prevented by improved education where’s which ones that hmm this question it’s just always this a good one oh I see okay so is this a good topic sentence teen pregnancy may be prevented by improved education yes I think that’s a great topic sentence and lots and lots to write about in the paragraph so yeah – Gerald there.

I would say definitely that is a good topic sentence all right what about G do we get anything for G technology is changing so fast again it’s too broad what could you say about technology changing so fast how about I’ll just copy this put it down here whoops technology is changing so fast that what could you say the older generation has trouble keeping up with advancements yeah sorry to the any any older people watching but technology is changing so fast that the older generation has trouble keeping up with advancements now you’ve just got something a little bit more specific H anything come in for H no um okay my daughter was born in the summer of 2010 I would again say something meaningful about it say to give some kind of idea about it so how about my daughter’s my daughter’s birth was the best day of my life we’ll keep it simple okay my daughter’s birth was the best day of my life and then I coming in from Justin oh yeah sorry he said that it was announcing the topic I would like to discuss poverty how poverty affects education again keep this one simple and say there are many ways how poverty affects education just like that okay and now you’ve got some strong topic sentences alright so that basically wraps it up.